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Óscar Espallargas

 * ... that Spanish LW12 classified para-alpine skier Óscar Espallargas moved to Aran for the 2011/2012 ski season in order to be based at Centro de Deportes de Invierno Adaptado?
 * Reviewed: David Gwilym Morris Roberts
 * Comment: Moved from user space.

Created by LauraHale (talk). Self nom at 12:16, 9 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg Length, move date, and hook verified. I am very puzzled by the following sentence: "Espallargas is a LW12-1 mono-skier, with a physical disability." Firstly, it is redundant to state that he has a physical disability when you've already stated that he is LW12. Second, why doesn't this sentence state what his disability is? I would like to see this fixed up before the article hits the main page. Also, the hook can be shortened. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 16:17, 26 February 2013 (UTC)
 * ALT1: "... that Spanish LW12 classified para-alpine skier Óscar Espallargas moved to Aran for the 2011/2012 ski season?"


 * Symbol possible vote.svg No action has been taken in over two weeks. Issues need to be addressed; giving a final week week for action per above before closing the nomination. (Notification was made to creator/nominator's page ten days ago; pinging one final time.) BlueMoonset (talk) 19:31, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I've fixed up the sentence in question. The short hook should be fine. I do not know his medical details, so I hope you can give that a pass. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:17, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. Thanks, Hawkeye. --Cryptic C62 · Talk 16:51, 17 March 2013 (UTC)