Template:Did you know nominations/1912 Brooklands Flanders Monoplane crash

1912 Brooklands Flanders Monoplane crash
Created/expanded by Mjroots (talk). Self nom at 19:39, 12 June 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that the first report into an aviation accident was produced in June 1912?


 * New article, all edits over about 3 days.
 * 1750 B of prose
 * Neutral tone, just lays out the facts
 * Inline citations employed
 * Source quality wise, there is a major newspaper, a govt website, and two sources listed at WikiProject Aviation/Resources, so I assume their reliability.


 * Sources match article for most part, AGF on offline
 * I do not see any close paraphrasing
 * Hook is brief and interesting
 * I'm undecided about how the hook links to the article, but it seems okay

Remaining issues
 * QPQ necessary
 * Ref 1 does not explicitly mention model numbers (F.3 and D.4). This isn't a deal breaker, but if they could be sourced, it would be nice. Looking at the relevant Wikipedia articles, I agree that those should be the models by seating and horsepower, respectively.
 * As an aside, Chrome does not like ref 1, but IE8 handles it fine. Chris857 (talk) 02:31, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * I missed a couple of things.
 * Looking at the report, is appears that the phrase should be in extenso, not in extensor
 * I'm not seeing where it is stated that this was the first air accident to be investigated. I see that it was the first in the UK, but is absolutely the first worldwide? Chris857 (talk) 02:36, 15 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol delete vote.svg It has been over two weeks since the above review was done, and notice was placed on the creator/nominator's talk page on the 15th and bumped on the 22nd. The author has been active on Wikipedia, just not here. There is an issue with the hook, and a QPQ has not been done. Given the complete lack of response, the article cannot be approved, and has been marked with the orange X icon. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:58, 3 July 2012 (UTC)