Template:Did you know nominations/8 Air Maintenance Squadron

8 Air Maintenance Squadron
5x expanded by Tartarus (talk). Self nom at 04:24, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that a member of 8 Air Maintenance Squadron was awarded the CDS Commendation for Heroism while on his day off?
 * Reviewed: Circle the Drain T artarus  talk 20:21, 31 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Hook: Short enough, cited, somewhat interesting.
 * Article: New enough, long enough. Image is fine. Every paragraph has at least one citation, references seem reliable. "He has truly..." is not encyclopedic. Neither is "Since 2006 Exercise Green Flag has been an annual event that is all about tactical airlift training". Paraphrasing checks 1, 2, 3, and 4 show some major problems with paraphrasing. Canadian government works are still copyrighted under crown copyright, so they cannot be copied with impudence.


 * Summary:Symbol delete vote.svg Needs major cleanup for copyright issues and encyclopedic tone. Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:52, 8 September 2011 (UTC)