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Abraham Lincoln's Lyceum address

 * ... that Abraham Lincoln (pictured) warned of a tyrant overtaking the United States from within in his 1838 Lyceum address?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hugh Carless
 * Comment: I'm open to any changes on that hook

Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nom at 01:32, 10 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg I think a comma is needed in the hook after "from within", else its good to go. — Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:13, 10 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure that it does need a comma, but thanks for the review. I added a photo of Lincoln. – Muboshgu (talk) 05:38, 10 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Comment: Would the hook not be better as (Alt 1) "... that during his 1838 Lyceum address, Abraham Lincoln (pictured) warned of a tyrant overtaking the United States from within?" This would make the new article the main subject of the hook.  Del ♉ sion  23  (talk)  18:45, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I can get behind that. It might help get it more page views. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:58, 21 January 2012 (UTC)