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Addison Cresswell

 * ... that Addison Cresswell, agent to Jonathan Ross and Michael McIntyre, founded a company with Paul Merton and Julian Clary?
 * Reviewed: George Carleton (died 1590)

Created by Sealman (talk), Matty.007 (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 17:55, 27 December 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg There are sentences which use close paraphrasing (in bold):
 * agency which has a television wing called 'Open Mike Productions'.[1]
 * I can't think of anything that could be changed to. Mat  ty  .  007
 * How about "subsidiary", "division" or "branch" ? Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις  18:22, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * It had been changed. Mat  ty  .  007
 * Cresswell organised the Channel 4 Comedy Gala annually in aid of Great Ormond Street Hospital.[3]
 * Done. Mat  ty  .  007
 * The following sentence is not clear (syntax problem bolded):
 * He was behind Live at the Apollo broadcast on BBC1 and hosted by Michael McIntyre and Stand Up for the Week on Channel 4 Television from 2010.[2]
 * Attempted fix. Mat  ty  .  007
 * The sentence remains unchanged and still does not make sense. "Creswell hosted by Michael McIntyre" sounds wrong. Or was the Apollo show hosted by Michael McIntyre? In that case the conjunction "and" should be removed. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις   18:22, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * I edit conflicted, so may not have copied it across properly. Changed. Mat  ty  .  007
 * The following sentence is unsourced and perhaps irrelevant to this bio:
 * His younger brother Luke Cresswell became a founder of the dance and percussion group Stomp.
 * Sourced. Mat  ty  .  007
 * Can you please put the reference at the end of the sentence: "His younger brother Luke Cresswell became a founder of the dance and percussion group Stomp." I still can't find it. In any case I still think what his brother does is irrelevant to his bio. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις  18:22, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Done. Mat  ty  .  007
 * The following sentence is a list and is weak as prose:
 * His client list went on to include: Jonathan Ross,[2] Lee Evans,[9] Jack Dee,[2] Michael McIntyre,[4] Jeremy Hardy,[1] Alan Carr,[1] Marcus Brigstocke,[1] and Rich Hall.[1]
 * Cut down. Mat  ty  .  007
 * Subtracting these sentences, the article length may still be over 1500 characters but it could benefit from an expansion. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις  12:14, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Attempted fix of issues. Mat  ty  .  007  12:24, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg. Good to go. Thank you Matty. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις  18:59, 5 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you Dr.K.. Mat  ty  .  007  19:02, 5 January 2014 (UTC)