Template:Did you know nominations/Advanced SystemCare

Advanced SystemCare

 * ... that Advanced SystemCare 4 had released plenty new features?

Created/expanded by Porchcorpter (talk). Self nom at 06:44, 9 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Has multiple issues. Nominator notified. Suraj  T  07:11, 9 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT-1 ... that Advanced SystemCare 4 had been given smarter PC tuneup features compared to Advanced SystemCare 3?
 * Smarter than what? Is this a fact rather than an opinion?-- Pontificalibus (talk) 19:24, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
 * How about that? This is a fact, not an opinion. -Porch corpter (contribs) 23:12, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Pontificalibus is right, and I pointed out as much to you on IRC. The hook you have written using the word "smarter" does not make sense - smarter than it's previous version? what makes it smarter? smarter in what way? do you have a source that says it's smarter?
 * What's more, the hook looks like advertising. I've looked through about a dozen sourced, and read the article a dozen times, and yet I cannot see a single fact that if put on the main page as a hook would not look like advertising. If there's anyone in DYK with more skill than me, I'd appreciate their help, because as it is, I would not pass that hook.  WormTT   &middot; &#32;(talk) 06:33, 14 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment Article has been updated with changes based on this review.  WormTT   &middot; &#32;(talk) 12:52, 12 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT-2 ... that Advanced SystemCare 5 gives a PC user comprehensive PC utilities?
 * I think that since the source doesn't say that, I've changed things a bit to a possible ALT-3...  WormTT   &middot; &#32;(talk) 09:25, 15 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ALT-3 ... that Advanced SystemCare 5 is a "do everything" suite of PC utilities?
 * Good hook Worm. -Porch corpter (talk/contribs) 09:47, 15 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Can't use this hook due to active/ongoing Articles for deletion/Advanced SystemCare. Not sure if we want to post free advertising on WP's MainPage for this computer product, anyway. --PFHLai (talk) 23:20, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg Closed as keep. Is the article ready for DYK? Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:52, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT-4: ... that Advanced SystemCare 5 works in beta version?
 * ALT-5: ... that Advanced SystemCare 5 runs in beta of its predecessor products?
 * Reviewer(s): Which hook would be the best hook? -Porch corpter (talk/contribs) 09:24, 25 September 2011 (UTC)