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Ajip Rosidi

 * ... that Indonesian writer Ajip Rosidi first became a magazine editor at the age of 15?
 * ALT1: ... that Indonesian writer Ajip Rosidi first story was published when he was 12?
 * Reviewed: Unitary psychosis

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 09:55, 31 August 2011 (UTC)


 * New eneough: Yes (created 09:04, 31 August 2011)Symbol confirmed.svg
 * Long enough: Yes (2230 when checked) Symbol confirmed.svg
 * Cited hook : Yes (Has in line citation) Symbol confirmed.svg
 * Hook content: I believe it is mislead it to call him editor as it makes the reader think he was editing the entire magazine. the hook should say something like "... that Indonesian writer Ajip Rosidi had his first story published in a magazine at the age of 12?Pictogram voting keep.svg
 * Within policy: Yes Paraphrasing OK, no image to check for copyright violation, reasonably well sourced. Meet Neutral point of view policy.Symbol confirmed.svg
 * Symbol question.svgll: Looks good just need to sort out hooks phrasing as it can be misleading.Symbol question.svg-- Ratio: Scripta  · [ Talk ] 10:40, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
 * That was a typo, sorry. I fixed it. ALT1: ... that Indonesian writer Ajip Rosidi first story was published when he was 12? Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:25, 31 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Hooks both look OK now.Symbol confirmed.svg-- Ratio: Scripta  · [ Talk ] 15:09, 31 August 2011 (UTC)