Template:Did you know nominations/Alysa Liu


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:29, 19 July 2018 (UTC)

Alysa Liu

 * ... that despite earning the 2nd-highest score in the 2018 U.S. Championships, 12-year old Alysa Liu was ineligible to compete at the 2018 World Junior Figure Skating Championships because she was too young? Source: ; )
 * ALT1:... that Alysa Liu won a gold medal at the 2018 U.S. Figure Skating Championships by over 18 points and earned the 2nd highest-ever score in the junior level?  Source:
 * Reviewed: Alex Adams (Holby City)

Created by Figureskatingfan (talk). Self-nominated at 04:39, 4 July 2018 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, neutral and well referenced. I like ALT0, which is verified with inline refs, but it's a bit too wordy IMO. How about:
 * ALT0a ... that despite earning the 2nd-highest score in the 2018 U.S. Championships, Alysa Liu was too young to compete at the World Junior Figure Skating Championships?
 * There's also some close paraphrasing issue such as "were conceived through anonymous egg donors and surrogate mothers". See Earwig report. -Zanhe (talk) 00:30, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with the revised hook. Fixed the close paraphrasing problems.  Thanks for the review. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 03:00, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
 * There are still some paraphrasing issues. I fixed a couple of sentences, but please fix this: "in the second half of the program, including triple lutz-triple toe and triple flip-loop-triple salchow combinations". -Zanhe (talk) 07:06, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Fixed above sentence. Thanks for the help; this is the first FS article I've created, and much of the language describing things in the sport are jargon. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:35, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg I know, technical terms are the hardest to paraphrase. When I write scientists' biographies I often have to omit their major research projects because I can't paraphrase some of the lengthy and precise scientific phrases. Thanks for taking care of the issues. Good to go. -Zanhe (talk) 23:01, 10 July 2018 (UTC)