Template:Did you know nominations/Angela Santomero

Angela Santomero

 * ... that Angela Santomero created, wrote, and produced two important TV shows, Blue's Clues and Super Why!?


 * Reviewed: Omar Elabdellaoui

Created/expanded by Figureskatingfan (talk). Self nom at 16:33, 28 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Per WP:DYKSG, should have "..." (ellipsis) rather than "Did you know". --George Ho (talk) 17:26, 28 June 2012 (UTC)

My take: "ALT1:... that two children's TV shows, Blue's Clues and Super Why!, were created, produced, and written by Angela Santomero?" A hook needs to take a passive tone, and "important" looks too dubious. I would prefer using "children's TV show" over "important". --George Ho (talk) 09:17, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm good with ALT1 as the hook. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 17:47, 30 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I think it's desirable to have the article link early rather than late, and I prefer the order of the original hook, which is a frequently used construction. I did, however, reverse the order of the shows since Super Why! has an exclamation mark in its formal title (which I've added to earlier hooks), and I thought it best to avoid having a "!?" at the end of the hook:
 * ALT2: ... that Angela Santomero created, wrote, and produced two children's TV shows, Super Why! and Blue's Clues? —BlueMoonset (talk) 12:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT2 is fine, too. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 15:02, 5 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote4.png Needs full review now that hook is settled. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:35, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go with ALT2. Long enough, new enough and within policy. Hook is good. Article is referenced, and the text has nothing of concern. Moswento talky 09:25, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Striking hooks that were not approved by reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 12:06, 10 July 2012 (UTC)