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Anneliese von Oettingen
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 * ... that ballet teacher Anneliese von Oettingen was featured in Sports Illustrated for training professional football players at her ballet school?
 * Reviewed: O Tú o Ninguna
 * Comment: Created by new Wikipedian User:KateJardiniere. I, User:Quadell, improved and submitted (my first).

Created by KateJardiniere (talk). Nominated by Quadell (talk) at 02:24, 14 August 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules – Length and wording fine.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source – Suitable and verified.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest – Reasonable.   Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable – No image included.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed – N/A

Article
 * Length – Suitable.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage – Into mainspace on 13th August.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP) – Adequate.   Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality – No problems.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing – No apparent P/CP. Article text uses and integrates the sources appropriately.   Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
 * copyvio (files) – N/A
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting – Well written.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion:
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Verified and ready to be featured.  Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  22:06, 14 August 2011 (UTC)