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Aryeh Tzvi Frommer

 * ... that Rabbi Aryeh Tzvi Frumer, a leading rosh yeshiva in prewar Poland, was forced to work in the Warsaw Ghetto in a factory that supplied footwear for German soldiers on the Russian front?
 * Reviewed: Bottom Wood
 * Comment: 5x expansion

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 10:19, 19 August 2012 (UTC)


 * The page has been moved to Aryeh Tzvi Frumer, so I changed the link in the hook. Yoninah (talk) 18:02, 19 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Review: Pictogram voting keep.svg AGF on the Hebrew, I can still read it but I can't understand any but the most common words. Article went from just over 300 characters to over 6,000 characters within the time frame. Hook facts are sourced in the article. I feel like the hook could benefit from a slight prose rewrite, but I can't put my finger on how. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:34, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. How about this rewrite:
 * ALT1: ... that Rabbi Aryeh Tzvi Frumer, a leading rosh yeshiva in prewar Poland, had to work in the Warsaw Ghetto making wooden clogs and fur slippers? Yoninah (talk) 20:38, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
 * I think that's better. Maybe this... – Muboshgu (talk) 21:01, 6 September 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT2: ... that Rabbi Aryeh Tzvi Frumer, a leading rosh yeshiva in prewar Poland, was forced to work in a Warsaw Ghetto factory making footwear for German soldiers?
 * Yes, I like ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 22:50, 6 September 2012 (UTC)