Template:Did you know nominations/Bernard H. Paul


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:40, 22 December 2015 (UTC)

Bernard H. Paul

 * ... that Bernard H. Paul produced the first television children's program?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Red Sea Sharks

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 20:41, 28 November 2015 (UTC).


 * Comment Review under way. 7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 20:59, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
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 * Review Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go! New article, timely nominated, moved for Coldwell's work space. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations.  DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough.  Every paragraph is cited. No copyright violations, plagiarism or too close paraphrasing.  Earwig's copy violation detector: Bernard H. Paul report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article.  It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. QPQ done. 7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 21:23, 28 November 2015 (UTC)
 * The sources say he "performed", not "produced", the first children's television show. I would write it this way:
 * ALT1: ... that puppeteer Bernard H. Paul performed the first children's television program? Yoninah (talk) 00:24, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
 * Sounds good to me as creator of article.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)


 * Review Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 confirmed. 7&amp;6=thirteen (☎) 12:41, 21 December 2015 (UTC)