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The result was: promoted by Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:02, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Betty Bone Schiess

 * ... that Betty Bone Schiess is one of the Philadelphia Eleven, leaders in the movement to allow the ordination of women in the Episcopal Church?
 * Reviewed: Samira Wiley

5x expanded by Gobonobo (talk), Slashme (talk). Nominated by Gobonobo (talk) at 01:32, 6 May 2014 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Nice expansion, QPQ done. Hook is a bit confusing, was she one of the leaders to allow ordination of women or she herself was ordinated by some one? &mdash; Vensatry (ping) 06:52, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
 * She was both one of the first women in the church to be ordained and a leader in the movement to allow ordination for women. I've added an alt below that might be clearer. gobonobo  + c 10:41, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that Betty Bone Schiess is one of the Philadelphia Eleven, the first female priests ordained by the Episcopal Church?
 * I support the alt-hook: more understandable than the original, even though it loses the aspect of leadership, which is a bit unfortunate. --Slashme (talk) 15:00, 6 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg for ALT1. I cannot read the book. &mdash; Vensatry (ping) 05:58, 7 May 2014 (UTC)


 * The linked source for that statement in the article is this Google Books page. Seems OK to me. --Slashme (talk) 07:26, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg for ALT1: The existing refs didn't support the hook fact very well: I've added a reference which clearly states the information used in ALT1. It also mentions the date of the ordination, July 29, 1974.
 * One could potentially create a hook about her leadership in filing suit with the EEOC: I've ensured that there's a good cited source for that if anyone wants to use it. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 15:56, 9 May 2014 (UTC)