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Bibi Amtus Salam

 * ... that Bibi Amtus Salam played a role in popularising Quaid-e-Azam?
 * Reviewed: Oyster ice cream

Created by Ashwin147 (talk). Self nominated at 04:57, 20 June 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. I see no evidence of close paraphrasing and the hook is appropriately sourced. An alternative, more interesting hook might be - Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
 * ALT1... that Bibi Amtus Salam once fasted with Gandhi for 21 days?
 * I'd like to rework the original hook as ALT2: ... that Bibi Amtus Salam, an associate of Gandhi's, played a role in popularising Jinnah's title of Quaid-e-Azam? - Less cryptic and sets a context. I'd personally prefer sticking to the Jinnah hook because it is unique; lots of people took up fasts with Gandhi at various points in his political career. Ashwin147 (talk) 08:42, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg I am happy with any of the three hooks, the nominator would prefer to go with ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC)