Template:Did you know nominations/Birdy (film)


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:04, 10 March 2017 (UTC)

Birdy (film)

 * ... that Birdy was the first feature film to be partially shot with the Skycam, a computer-controlled camera system created by Steadicam inventor Garrett Brown? http://alanparker.com/film/birdy/making/

Improved to Good Article status by FrankRizzo2006 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:42, 1 March 2017 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Detailed quality article, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I confess to be not happy with the hook. Do you want to promote the camera and its inventor? Here we have a film about friendship and obsession, and all we are told is technical stuff? Would you try to say something about the film? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:16, 4 March 2017 (UTC)


 * I am willing to expand on the details. How about "...that Birdy, a 1984 film starring Matthew Modine and Nicolas Cage, was the first feature film to be partially shot with the Skycam, a computer-controlled camera system?" FrankRizzo (talk) 04:42, 5 March 2017 (UTC)


 * The names of stars don't add "obsession" for readers who don't know them ;) - I wouldn't need "computer-controlled ..." at all, there's a link. Or do you want to point that out? That's a serious question, because if you do I will approve, of course. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:42, 5 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Perhaps, maybe, "...that the 1984 film Birdy, a tale of friendship and obsession, was the first feature film to be partially shot with the Skycam, a camera system?" FrankRizzo (talk) 17:46, 5 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Perhaps - sorry for again new thoughts - better to quote a review than the intentions of the authors, some of "Birdy is a heavy adult drama about best friends and the after-effects of war"? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:13, 5 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Maybe "...that "Birdy, 'a heavy adult drama about best friends and the after-effects of war', was the first feature film to be partially shot with the Skycam, a camera system?" FrankRizzo (talk) 06:51, 7 March 2017 (UTC)


 * Thank you. How about (and note that you have to bold and link the subject, every time, and leave a space after the three dots):
 * ALT3: ... that Birdy, the first feature film partially shot with the Skycam camera system, was regarded as "a heavy adult drama about best friends and the after-effects of war"?
 * I understand that this is your second DYK nom, so you don't have to review in turn (called QPQ or qui pro pro).
 * Symbol voting keep.svg I approve ALT3, reworded from your last version. If you agree, we are done ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:25, 7 March 2017 (UTC)
 * I approve of the change. Thank you, Gerda Arendt (talk). FrankRizzo (talk) 01:38, 8 March 2017 (UTC)