Template:Did you know nominations/Birthday Cake (song)

Birthday Cake (song)
Created/expanded by Calvin999 (talk). Nominated at 19:29, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that according to two critics, "Birthday Cake" is a song which expresses Rihanna's desire to have a "quickie"?




 * Hook: Great, but I have another suggestion (especially since it's  emphasized so much in the reviews): ALT1 ... that Rihanna's "Birthday Cake", said to resemble a real-life quickie, lasts just 78 seconds? or ALT2 ... that "Birthday Cake",Rihanna's 78-second ode to quickies, has been described as "not enough of a celebration"?
 * New and long enough; you could listen to the song five times before finishing the article. Referencing looks thorough. Paraphrasing checks: 1, 2 seem okay.
 * Summary: Symbol question.svg Just waiting for feedback on the ALTs. Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:42, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I prefer the first one. "The quickie" doesn't make sense, because it's not an object or place. Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn 17:51, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. ALT1 preferred. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:14, 12 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks :). Calvin  &bull; Watch  n'  Learn 23:24, 12 January 2012 (UTC)