Template:Did you know nominations/Bruce Rondón

Bruce Rondón

 * ... that Bruce Rondón, a Venezuelan baseball player, was described as a "rare talent" by Dave Dombrowski?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Krikor Kalfayan

Created by Muboshgu (talk), AutomaticStrikeout (talk). Nominated by Muboshgu (talk) at 23:33, 10 March 2013 (UTC).


 * An alternate hook is necessary. At a minimum, it should read ALT1: "... that Bruce Rondón, a Venezuelan baseball player, was described as a "rare talent" by Tigers General Manager Dave Dombrowski?"  I'm not a fan of using quotations of descriptions in general though. Ryan Vesey 00:20, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
 * I agree with you that the quote should be attributed, so I rewrote the hook to include the source. I can try to think of an alt hook, though I don't see the issue with this one, as being described as a "rare talent" should be interesting enough. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:58, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg If somebody could review this, it would be very much appreciated.  Automatic  Strikeout   ( T  •  C  •  AAPT ) 16:20, 22 March 2013 (UTC)

The revised hook looks fine, it's cited, it's interesting, and at the time of the nom, it was within five days. Looks good. Go  Phightins  !  19:05, 23 March 2013 (UTC)