Template:Did you know nominations/Carmen y Laura


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 30 June 2018 (UTC)

Carmen y Laura

 * ... that the two sisters of Tejano music group Carmen y Laura honed their careful harmony while doing chores in separate rooms? Jasinski, Laurie E., ed. (2012). The Handbook of Texas Music (2 ed.). Denton, TX: Texas State Historical Association. p. 99. ISBN 978-0-87611-252-6. "They practiced harmonizing as they carried out household chores in separate rooms at home, thereby discovering how to listen to each other closely."
 * ALT1: ... that Carmen y Laura musical performances would last up to 4 hours? Jasinski, Laurie E., ed. (2012). The Handbook of Texas Music (2 ed.). Denton, TX: Texas State Historical Association. p. 99. ISBN 978-0-87611-252-6. "Carmen y Laura worked intensely while on tour, often singing for dances that lasted for four hours."
 * Reviewed: Edna Loftus
 * Comment: moved from draft space on June 6

Created by 78.26 (talk). Self-nominated at 17:26, 7 June 2018 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Interesting lives, on good sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - Hooks: I find the ALT too general, and only saying something about endurance. In the first, I like the mentioning of their style, and that they are sisters, but would not put it all together. How about "duo" instead of "group"? I wonder if the fact of them singing in different rooms is sooo ineresting. "careful harmony" sounds strange (to me), - well-tuned? How about saying something completely different? - Article: link the music style, and mention it sooner? A word seems to be missing in the second sentence. "female duet" sounds strange (at least to me), how about "women duo"? (I know duet as a piece, not a group.) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:30, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * I dunno, I find the concept of learning to harmonize while in different rooms to be very interesting. If other's don't agree, I'll have to find something else.  How about:


 * ALT2: ... that Tejano music sister duo Carmen y Laura honed their harmony skills while doing chores in separate rooms?
 * 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 16:31, 11 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Perhaps I am the only one who has no idea what "honed" means, which is not in the article. Suggestion:
 * ALT3: ... that Carmen y Laura, sisters who formed a duo for mostly Tejano music, improved their skill in harmony by singing together while doing chores in separate rooms?
 * Symbol voting keep.svg approved, unless you come up with an improvement. - I trust that you'll consider the suggestions for the article. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:41, 11 June 2018 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg The article is currently tagged for sectioning; it can't be promoted until this issue is resolved. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:49, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Let me not say what I think of tagging. I inserted a header, but refuse to post "Legacy" above one sentence. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:50, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg The sectioning issue has been addressed, so I'm restoring the tick. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 08:43, 23 June 2018 (UTC)