Template:Did you know nominations/Carol Rasco


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The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:33, 21 August 2018 (UTC)

Carol Rasco

 * ... that during Governor Bill Clinton's presidential campaign, political aide Carol Rasco was credited for running Arkansas in his absence? Source: ""she ran much of the state's daily business for the year that Mr. Clinton was out campaigning for the Presidency" as well." (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
 * Reviewed: 4th nom, N/A, I'll review one if I have time tonight though

5x expanded by Originalmess (talk). Self-nominated at 23:17, 4 August 2018 (UTC).

I've been trying loads of variations of phrasing in the last clause and I can't tell what sounds most natural anymore. Let me know what you think. — Bilorv(c)(talk) 19:01, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 * ALT1: ... that during Governor Bill Clinton's presidential campaign, political aide Carol Rasco took over business in Arkansas in his absence?


 * Thanks so much for the in-depth assessment! I've made the recommended changes, and your alt sounds good - how does this sound though?
 * * ALT2: ... that during Governor Bill Clinton's presidential campaign, political aide Carol Rasco took over Arkansas' daily business?
 * It's similar, just a bit shorter. Let me know which of those you prefer, I'm not sure if alt2 is too vague/implies something that didn't happen.  originalmess  how u doin that busta rhyme? 13:53, 20 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Yep, perfectly happy with either alt but I think yours is better. ALT2 approved. — Bilorv(c)(talk) 14:46, 20 August 2018 (UTC)