Template:Did you know nominations/Cinema of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, Monique Mbeka Phoba

Cinema of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, Monique Mbeka Phoba
Created/expanded by Aymatth (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 22:12, 20 March 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that almost all filmmakers of the cinema of the Democratic Republic of the Congo live and work abroad, such as Monique Mbeka Phoba who lives in Benin?


 * Reviewed Amish dolls.♦ Dr. Blofeld  22:24, 20 March 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg cinema article's date, length and sourcing are OK and there are no plagiarism/copyvio issues that I can see. The length, date and sourcing for Monique Mbeka Phoba are also OK, but there are one or two places where the paraphrasing is too close, even though the original is in French e.g. "Le film est centré sur les Léopards, l’équipe nationale congolaise qui, en 1974, avait été la première équipe d’Afrique noire à participer à une Coupe du Monde de la FIFA" in the original source and "The film centers on the Leopards, the Congolese national team in 1974, which was the first black African team to participate in a FIFA World Cup." in the article. Also the hook is not exactly supported by the source which says that "For now the production is fully dependent on filmmakers living and working abroad", which isn't quite the same thing, although it rather implies it. Perhaps adding 'active' before filmmakers would work. Mikenorton (talk) 19:33, 1 April 2012 (UTC)


 * I tweaked the wording - think it is fixed. I suggest the shorter ALT that follows. Aymatth2 (talk) 02:06, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT1 ... that most active  filmmakers of the Democratic Republic of the Congo, such as Monique Mbeka Phoba, live and work abroad?
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks, I think that works. Mikenorton (talk) 07:04, 2 April 2012 (UTC)