Template:Did you know nominations/Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu

Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu
Created/expanded by Diego Grez (talk). Self nom at 04:08, 2 August 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu cheerleading team, Cheer C.P.S., placed first in an international tournament in the United States?
 * reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Eddy Rodríguez (catcher)
 * 5x expanded


 * Symbol question.svg Couple of comments:
 * Not a huge deal, but WP:LEADCITE suggests that the lead not contain any redundant references that will appear in text.
 * I actually think the 2nd place ranking of the debate team, Kick-Ass, might make for a better lead here, but it's your call.
 * The facebook fan page under external links is not really appropriate per WP:EXTERNAL, so it should be removed.
 * Otherwise, I think it's in good shape. I, Jethrobot  drop me a line (note: not a bot!) 07:45, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Okay! I just did some changes per your suggestions. I propose the following hook:
 * ALT1: ... that Kick-Ass, Colegio de la Preciosa Sangre de Pichilemu English debate team, ranked second in a 2011 regional tournament?
 * Diego Grez (talk) 14:45, 22 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg I think the article is in good shape. Another editor who has better proficiency in Spanish may want to review the references to ensure they are reliable sources, but the sample I checked out seemed sufficient, so I will AGF this one.  I, Jethrobot  drop me a line (note: not a bot!) 04:26, 25 August 2012 (UTC)