Template:Did you know nominations/Cubana de Aviación Flight 9646

Cubana de Aviación Flight 9646
Created/expanded by Jetstreamer (talk). Self nom at 11:55, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Cubana Flight 9646, an Il-62M that crashed shortly after departing from José Martí International Airport, killed 45 residents of a populated area besides the 126 occupants of the aircraft, and that to date it is the worst aviation accident occurred on Cuban soil?
 * Reviewed: Liga Geral dos Trabalhadores de Angola


 * Symbol question.svg The hook is too long, can you please just shorten this to 200 characters? Zia Khan 18:53, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I reworded the hook as suggested. Hope the new version appearing below is now of your liking. Just in case the image provided is used, I also modified its caption a bit. Thanks for your time.--Jetstreamer Talk 21:09, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT... that the worst aviation accident occurred on Cuban soil killed 45 residents of a populated area and all 126 occupants of the aircraft when it crashed shortly after takeoff?
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Article created in the last five days, length is good, neutral, hook (ALT) checks out. Zia Khan 21:48, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote4.png Second opinion requested to verify the image used. Zia Khan 21:48, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Should it be approved, may I request for this hook to appear on 3 sep?--Jetstreamer Talk 22:20, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
 * I think so. Expand it a little more. Regards. Zia Khan 20:11, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Expand what?--Jetstreamer Talk 10:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT2... that the worst aviation accident to have occurred on Cuban soil resulted in 171 deaths when the aircraft crashed shortly after takeoff?
 * – I think this would be more succinct. Del ♉ sion 23   (talk)  23:20, 15 August 2012 (UTC)
 * It's good for me. After all, the hook is intended to take the reader's attention and to get him/her to the article for the details.--Jetstreamer Talk 23:30, 15 August 2012 (UTC)