Template:Did you know nominations/Dartmouth Harbour

Dartmouth Harbour
Created/expanded by Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk), and Paradox the Sneath (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 05:59, 6 November 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Dartmouth Castle protected Dartmouth Harbour (castle and harbour pictured)?

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 * Symbol question.svg The hook sounds too simple. As a reader I am not interested at all after reading it. Please think of a more interesting hook for reconsideration.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 08:08, 9 November 2012 (UTC)


 * ALT1: ... that warships routinely visit Dartmouth Harbour? --Rosiestep (talk) 16:42, 11 November 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg Original hook checks out but I'm struggling with ALT1 given the reference used in the article. I agree that ALT1 is more interesting. Any other suggestions? One reference (in the Features section) is labelled as potentially unreliable/unbalanced and it may be better to remove the small piece of text associated with that. Everything else checks out including the image. violet/riga [talk] 22:19, 13 November 2012 (UTC)


 * I removed the ref and sentence in Features section labelled as potentially unreliable/unbalanced. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:55, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * ALT2 ... that an artillery blockhouse was built in 1481 to protect Dartmouth Harbour? --Rosiestep (talk) 04:55, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT2 checks out and is the preferred hook. violet/riga [talk] 19:39, 14 November 2012 (UTC)