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Don't Worry Kyoko (Mummy's Only Looking for Her Hand in the Snow)

 * ... that Yoko Ono's 1969 song "Don't Worry Kyoko," released with John Lennon's single "Cold Turkey," was inspired by a custody battle over her daughter, with whom she didn't reunite for another 25 years?
 * Reviewed: Baby Ray

Created by Rlendog (talk). Self nom at 02:02, 27 December 2012 (UTC)


 * ALT1 ... that Yoko Ono's 1969 song "Don't Worry Kyoko (Mummy's Only Looking for Her Hand in the Snow)" was inspired by a custody battle over her daughter, with whom she didn't reunite for another 25 years?
 * Hook nitpick I think who should be whom. Chris857 (talk) 02:52, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
 * I have no problem with that change, although I wouldn't claim to be an expert on when to use "who" and "whom". Rlendog (talk) 04:12, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
 * The last phrase should read: "with whom she didn't reunite for another 25 years". Yoninah (talk) 14:17, 27 December 2012 (UTC)
 * That sounds better, and then the "whom" is clearly the right pronoun. Rlendog (talk) 22:38, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Fixed grammar in hooks. Yoninah (talk) 10:38, 31 December 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote4.png Review needed now that hooks are set. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:52, 9 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Length, date and sources are all OK. Article reads well and is interesting. The hook is properly sourced - I think ALT1 is preferable. We're good to go. Prioryman (talk) 10:44, 13 January 2013 (UTC)