Template:Did you know nominations/Drexel Collection

Drexel Collection
Created/expanded by Kosboot (talk). Nominated by Ayanosh (talk) at 05:05, 19 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that the Drexel Collection, a collection of over 6,000 volumes of books about music and musical scores owned by The New York Public Library, was donated by Joseph W. Drexel?


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Article looks good with regard to new-ness, length and policy. The hook is of the proper length and formatting, but is rather uninteresting, in my opinion. (The Drexel Collection was donated by a man named Drexel? Who'd have guessed?!?) It might be better to leave off the last part and just say:
 * ALT1 - ... that the Drexel Collection is a collection of over 6,000 volumes of books about music and musical scores owned by The New York Public Library?
 * Otherwise, everything looks good. Hook source and all other offline sources are being taken on AGF. Dana boomer (talk) 11:42, 20 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Agree with Dana boomer that Alt 1 sounds better.Ayanosh (talk) 13:53, 20 July 2012 (UTC)