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Esther Armah, Kwesi Armah

 * ... that Esther Armah and her family were placed under house arrest during the 1966 Ghana military coup while her father Kwesi Armah was on a diplomatic mission to Vietnam?
 * Reviewed: St. Mark's Pro-Cathedral (Hastings, Nebraska), Safetray

Created/expanded by Cmprince (talk). Self nom at 03:16, 17 July 2012 (UTC)




 * Symbol confirmed.svg  Booth articles new enough and long enough at time of nomination.    QPQ done. Kwesi Armah is fully supported by sources.  Both articles read as neutral enough.  Plagiarism spot spot check on both articles reveals no cause for concern. Hook properly formatted. No images to check.
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline sources support text and were not plagiarised to write.
 * Symbol question.svg Esther Armah has a fact tag that needs cleaning. This does appear to support part of hooked fact "Despite this rejection, Nkrumah was determined to play a part in the conflict, and in February 1966 led another delegation with Armah to Vietnam. During this mission, however, military forces within Ghana instigated a coup d'état while the leaders were away." Find source? --LauraHale (talk) 21:01, 28 July 2012 (UTC)

Fully support Esther article. Find a source that better supports hooked fact. Please comment here AND my talk page when addressed so I can finish review. --LauraHale (talk) 21:01, 28 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback! Cites added for Esther and for the coup, and also one more specific article placing Armah and Nkrumah together on mission. Cmprince (talk) 07:02, 29 July 2012 (UTC)

Should be good to go now. --LauraHale (talk) 07:48, 29 July 2012 (UTC)