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Fish Keitseng

 * ... that the Motswana ANC activist Fish Keitseng helped anti-Apartheid leaders including Nelson Mandela and Thabo Mbeki to move through Bechuanaland?
 * Reviewed:

Created/expanded by Soman (talk). Self nom at 15:18, 30 October 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Artiicle satisfies all DYK rules. Reference 5 is cited to the hook. Good to go.-- Nvvchar . 20:02, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg The hook does not make grammatical sense. Should it say "helped" rather than "help", or something else? A basic problem like this should not be ignored when reviewing a nomination: "good to go", if it must be used, should mean exactly that. Another point about the hook: even though "like" is shorter, if Keitseng actually did help Mandela and Mbeki, then "including" should be used instead: it wasn't leaders like them, it was them. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:56, 7 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Oops, my mistake. Of course it should be 'helped'. I changed the hook accordingly. --Soman (talk) 06:41, 8 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote4.png Looking for new reviewer to check hook, and also weigh in on the "including" issue. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:54, 16 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg I've tidied the references in the article, and made a non-controversial chance to "including" in the reference, which is more correct, and more interesting. Spotchecks reveal no close paraphrasing, and the article satisfies all criteria. Good to go.  Harrias  talk 14:35, 21 November 2012 (UTC)