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Frederic, Count of Luna

 * ... that King Martin of Aragon (pictured) wanted his grandson, Frederic of Luna, to be legitimated by the pope, but died from laughter before he could accomplish it?
 * Reviewed: 2006 Philippine Mount Everest Expedition

Created by Surtsicna (talk). Self nominated at 22:24, 22 February 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg Very interesting hook. All source are offline but the one needed to verify the hook (Source 4). Size looks good, and the article was recently created. However, I don't see any mentions from a pope in the article. ComputerJA (talk) 02:29, 23 February 2013 (UTC)
 * That is correct. The article now mentions him. However, I would like to replace the original hook with an alternative that is more easier to understand and thus more attractive to an average reader:
 * ALT1: ... that King Martin of Aragon (pictured) wanted to ensure the accession of his illegitimate grandson, Frederic of Luna, but died from laughter before he could do so?
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Great. This is good to go now. ComputerJA (talk) 19:28, 23 February 2013 (UTC)