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Gambling, Gods and LSD

 * ... that film director Peter Mettler said his documentary Gambling, Gods and LSD was not scripted, that "[it] was making itself while I acted as a medium"?
 * Reviewed: Gambia women's national football team

Created/expanded by Bruce1ee (talk). Self nom at 09:30, 7 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol question.svg Generally grand, mostly checks out alright. Discogs is not generally seen as a reliable source, though; but the information found there might be present on the reliable AllMusic. The sentence in the article that the hook is derived from could probably be clarified a little; preceding sentences speak of Mettler in the third person so a direct attribution of the quote might be needed as it's the first instance of first person quotation in that paragraph. The hook itself is grand, though might be made a little cleaner by phrasing it as "... that film director Peter Mettler said his documentary Gambling, Gods and LSD was not scripted, but "was making itself while I acted as a medium"?". GRAPPLE   X  23:17, 17 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Thanks for the review. I've attributed the quote in the article, and I prefer your revised hook, which I've copied:
 * ALT 1: ... that film director Peter Mettler said his documentary Gambling, Gods and LSD was not scripted, but "was making itself while I acted as a medium"? —Bruce1eetalk 06:33, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Still concerned about the use of Discogs, though I had a look and couldn't find the album on Allmusic. Looking at what Discogs is used to source, though, it could easily be replaced as a source by the album itself, using its liner notes or information on the back cover. Aside from that we're good to go. GRAPPLE   X  06:47, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg I've replaced the Discogs refs with the soundtrack liner notes. —Bruce1eetalk 08:11, 18 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Tickety-boo. GRAPPLE   X  14:22, 18 May 2012 (UTC)