Template:Did you know nominations/Gilda E. Nardone


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The result was: promoted by Montanabw (talk) 23:17, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Gilda E. Nardone

 * ... that Gilda E. Nardone, an employment advocate for older women forced to enter the workforce, saw her own mother become a "displaced homemaker"?
 * ALT1: ... that women's advocate Gilda E. Nardone mother was a displaced homemaker?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Royal Stag

Created by Yoninah (talk). Self-nominated at 22:24, 10 February 2016 (UTC).


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 * Hi thanks for the review! I agree that ALT1 is hookier. Yes, this can be moved to the Women's History Month holding area. Yoninah (talk) 11:09, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I'm not crazy about that "apostrophe-s" next to the subject's name. What do you think about this tweak?
 * ALT2: ... that Gilda E. Nardone reaches out to women who, like her mother, became displaced homemakers? Yoninah (talk) 19:24, 11 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg I am not particularly flustered by the possessive 's'. I think ALT1 is snappier, but ALT2 is certainly also acceptable.Georgejdorner (talk) 02:39, 12 February 2016 (UTC)
 * I think I've got it:
 * ALT1a: ... that the mother of women's advocate Gilda E. Nardone was a displaced homemaker? Yoninah (talk) 17:33, 28 February 2016 (UTC)

PROMOTED with ALT1a. Montanabw (talk) 23:17, 9 March 2016 (UTC)