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Herta Feely

 * ... that after co-founding Safe Kids Worldwide, Herta Feely became an award-winning writer?
 * Reviewed: Mychel Thompson (DIFF), Sim Bhullar

Created/expanded by GRuban (talk). Self nom at 03:50, 13 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg date and length fine, well sourced. The hook is acceptable, but a bit on the general side. Perhaps you want to name a specific title (they are interesting) and a specific award (they are notable)? You know best what to choose. I will watch. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:44, 23 January 2012 (UTC)


 * ... that after co-founding Safe Kids Worldwide, Herta Feely became an award-winning writer for her unpublished novel, The Trials of Serra Blue?
 * I admit I'm going more for the "unexpected combination" hook. Maybe it's just me, but I don't usually expect people who found notable advocacy organizations to become novelists. I expect them to stay advocates, go into politics, community service, that sort of thing. --GRuban (talk) 21:50, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I think, it's still combination, but tells me more about "novel" and the kind of title she chose. Award-winning could be a local club's award for a poem, nothing serious. But the ALT reads a bit as if she wrote just that one novel. What do you think of
 * ALT2: ... that after co-founding Safe Kids Worldwide, Herta Feely became a writer who earned awards like a First Novel Fellowship for The Trials of Serra Blue? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:07, 23 January 2012 (UTC)