Template:Did you know nominations/Hill Women

Notes:


 * Hook:
 * The hook states poor graceful women. Correct me if I am wrong, but, this seems to be a subjective interpretation of the painting's title. I would recommend switching back to the painting's title or if the artist herself has referenced this painting by a different name, we can use that one.
 * Article lede:
 * The second part of the lede appears a tad WP:PROSELINE and can be tightened. e.g., currently it reads In xxxx, ... In xxxx, ... etc.
 * Minor - can we also introduce what the painting is about in the lede itself?
 * Article body:
 * Can the composition section be augmented with any interpretation / notes that the artist might have mentioned about the work itself? Given that Sher-Gill is a relatively modern artist, do we have any notes from interviews etc? Currently, the section ends abruptly with one of the women's lips appearing to be pouting.
 * Do we have any notes about where the painting currently resides?

Overall, this is nice work. Handing it back to you for some tweaks. Ktin (talk) 18:19, 27 January 2024 (UTC)


 * ALT1... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting of Hill Women appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp?

Thank you. Adjusted hook and will check rest soon. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:39, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
 * ALT1 looks good. Let me know when some of the edits are done. Will mark this hook as approved. Ktin (talk) 08:06, 28 January 2024 (UTC)


 * ALT1a... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting Hill Women (pictured), appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp? Whispyhistory (talk) 13:53, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
 * ALT1b... that Amrita Sher-Gil's painting Hill Women, appeared on a 1978 Indian postage stamp (pictured)?
 * Made a minor edit to note that the stamp is being pictured rather than the painting. Marking ALT1b as approved. Ktin (talk) 17:43, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Note to promoting admin / editor. Given the work, I would recommend that we wait for a picture slot to promote this hook with the image, unless the nominator thinks otherwise. Ktin (talk) 17:45, 28 January 2024 (UTC)
 * ... Thank you for reviewing. Is it any better now please? Whispyhistory (talk) 17:55, 31 January 2024 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Nice work. Good to go. Ktin (talk) 03:45, 1 February 2024 (UTC)