Template:Did you know nominations/Hillary Clinton presidential campaign, 2016


 * The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as |this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:02, 20 April 2015 (UTC)

Hillary Clinton presidential campaign, 2016

 * ... that Hillary Clinton's 2016 presidential campaign, began with a road trip from New York to Iowa in a customized Chevrolet Express van?


 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zelia N. Breaux
 * Comment: Article was first worked on a year ago but then was redirected until April 10, which can be considered the start date for here. There have already been many contributors to the article, including myself; I have listed those I thought most responsible for the article content but I can't be sure someone wasn't left out.

Created by Juno (talk), PrairieKid (talk), Wasted Time R (talk), Asdasdasdff (talk), Platypus2012 (talk), Godwin1996 (talk), Tiller54 (talk, and Tvoz (talk). Nominated by Wasted Time R (talk) at 10:32, 16 April 2015 (UTC).
 * Comment: Nomination looks good but I think it would sound better as "that Hillary Clinton's 2016 presidential campaign began with..." Tiller54 (talk) 17:07, 16 April 2015 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Looks good. I agree with Tiller's suggestion and have implemented it. Article has been expanded enough over the past week, is neutral, no copyright issues found, and hook is both attention-grabbing and reliably sourced. QPQ is complete. Snuggums (talk / edits) 15:06, 17 April 2015 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the comments and review. There was a stray comma left over in that edit.  Furthermore it can be recast to not use a possessive, useful partly because the article title itself doesn't and partly to better duck the ongoing name issue for her:
 * ALT2 ... that the Hillary Clinton 2016 presidential campaign began with a road trip from New York to Iowa in a customized Chevrolet Express van?
 * Also, I've added an editor to the contributor list who's made several useful edits recently. Wasted Time R (talk) 11:28, 18 April 2015 (UTC)