Template:Did you know nominations/Holocausto (band)

Holocausto (band)
Created by Blackmetalbaz (talk). Nominated by Malconfort (talk) at 17:39, 12 April 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Holocausto used the Nazi atrocities in the concentration camps as its basis?


 * Symbol possible vote.svg The hook is too obvious: nobody needs to know anything about this band, besides the name, to guess that it is about that. It is a band with a self-evident name, better propose another hook. You should also clarify in the hook that we are talking about a band. Besides, the prose must have at least 1500 characters, and this article currently has 1392 (remember that lists do not count, so line-up and discography do not count). I also suggest to use categories from Category:Brazilian heavy metal musical groups by genre Cambalachero (talk) 20:34, 23 April 2012 (UTC)
 * ... that Holocausto was described as the most controversial Brazilian heavy metal band ever?--Malconfort (talk) 01:34, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Done, the second hook is better. I made some little fixes to it, hope you don't mind. Cambalachero (talk) 19:03, 29 April 2012 (UTC)