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I Shall Not Be Moved (poetry)

 * ... that the poems in I Shall Not Be Moved, Maya Angelou's fifth book of poetry, are more effective when read aloud?
 * Comment: Please let me know if I've named this article correctly.

Created/expanded by Figureskatingfan (talk). Self nominated at 20:13, 25 July 2013 (UTC).


 * Reviewed: Burj Qatar


 * Symbol question.svg The hook (which comes from the lead) conflicts with what the body text says, which says that Lynn Z. Bloom, believes her poetry is more interesting when Maya Angelou recites it. ViperSnake151   Talk  01:44, 26 July 2013 (UTC)


 * Ok, I fixed the lead to better correspond with Bloom's words.
 * ALT2: ... that the poems in I Shall Not Be Moved, Maya Angelou's fifth book of poetry, are more interesting when she reads them aloud?
 * Still think it should be attributed to either Bloom or "a critic/scholar", because how it is worded presumes that this is an opinion of Wikipedia. ViperSnake151   Talk  18:34, 26 July 2013 (UTC)

Ok, let's try it again...
 * ALT3: ... that one critic thinks that the poems in I Shall Not Be Moved, Maya Angelou's fifth book of poetry, are more interesting when she reads them aloud? Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 23:47, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 * I actually had a better idea:
 * ALT4: ... that I Shall Not Be Moved, Maya Angelou's fifth book of poetry, has been described as "exquisitely simple worksong"?
 * This one is less ambiguously attributed, and actually relates specifically to the book itself. ViperSnake151   Talk  20:21, 27 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'm fine with ALT4. Christine (Figureskatingfan) (talk) 14:02, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Good. ViperSnake151   Talk  01:20, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Since ALT4 was created by ViperSnake151, the hook cannot also be approved by ViperSnake151 (per WP:DYKSG). Need an independent reviewer to check ALT4. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:20, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg ALT4 is sourced offline, I am willing to accept that from a trusted editor AGF. Another fine article! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:49, 30 July 2013 (UTC)