Template:Did you know nominations/Irma Lozada

Irma Lozada
Created/expanded by Marine 69-71 (talk). Self nom at 20:38, 11 October 2011 (UTC)
 * ... that Irma Lozada was the first female police officer to die in the line of duty in New York?


 * Symbol confirmed.svg Article length and date, hook length, and hook fact verified. Prose is fine, sources are reliable, and I didn't find any evidence of close paraphrasing/plagiarism. I added a citation needed tag (unrelated to the hook), and suggest that her age at death be mentioned in the article. Instead of "in action", would "in the line of duty" be a better way to phrase this? Sasata (talk) 04:10, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Article length and date, hook length, and hook fact verified. Prose is fine, sources are reliable, and I didn't find any evidence of close paraphrasing/plagiarism. I added a citation needed tag (unrelated to the hook), and suggest that her age at death be mentioned in the article. Instead of "in action", would "in the line of duty" be a better way to phrase this? Sasata (talk) 04:10, 12 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank you, I rephrased and provided the citation requested, plus her age at the time of her death has been posted in the infobox. Tony the Marine (talk) 04:45, 12 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg There is a direct quote near the bottom of the article that needs a citation. Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:50, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm surprised at myself that I missed that one, however is now taken care of. Tony the Marine (talk) 02:40, 17 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Problem I saw was fixed. Tick based on previous review. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:47, 17 October 2011 (UTC)

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