Template:Did you know nominations/Ixalotriton niger, Ixalotriton parva, Pseudoeurycea praecellens, Thorius pennatulus, Pseudoeurycea smithi

Ixalotriton niger, Ixalotriton parva, Pseudoeurycea praecellens, Thorius pennatulus, Pseudoeurycea smithi

 * ... that the black jumping salamander, the dwarf false brook salamander, the admirable false brook salamander, the Smith's false brook salamander and Thorius pennatulus are all endemic to Mexico and "Critically Endangered"?
 * Reviewed: Vacha Reservoir
 * Comment: Also reviewed Your Majesty (horse), Chief Singer, Habibti Petrarch (horse)

Created/expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nom at 19:49, 18 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Maile66 (talk) 12:15, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Current hook is 219 characters. Can you shorten it, please? Maile66 (talk) 12:26, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I believe multiple article hooks are allowed slightly longer hooks. In this case, the salamanders have such long common names that most of the hook is taken up by these. If you want to stick to the 200 character rule, what about:

' ALT1 ... that the black jumping salamander, the dwarf false brook salamander, the admirable false brook salamander, the Smith's false brook salamander' and Thorius pennatulus are all "Critically Endangered"?
 * Well, you are absolutely correct about hook length on multiples. I just checked the rules.  FYI - Toolserver seems to be offline right now, so there may be a delay in the duplication detector part of this review. Maile66 (talk) 12:56, 3 October 2012 (UTC)


 * The following has been checked in this review by Maile66
 * Four QPQs done by Cwmhiraeth on September 18, 2012
 * Original hook - the author's preference - is interesting, appropriately sourced, and length of 219 characters allowable on by DYK Rules on multiple-article hooks


 * Ixalotriton niger 
 * Article bot-generated as a stub on July 23, 2007
 * Before 5X expansion by Cwmhiraeth, size was 220 characters of readable prose
 * 5X expansion size is 1,945 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well sourced, well-written
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found


 * Ixalotriton parva
 * Article bot-generated as a stub on July 23, 2007
 * Before 5X expansion by Cwmhiraeth, size was 202 characters of readable prose
 * 5X expansion size is 1,798 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well sourced, well-written
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found


 * Pseudoeurycea praecellens
 * Article bot-generated as a stub on July 23, 2007
 * Before 5X expansion by Cwmhiraeth, size was 210 characters of readable prose
 * 5X expansion size is 1,599 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well sourced, well-written
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found


 * Pseudoeurycea smithi
 * Article bot-generated as a stub on July 23, 2007
 * Before 5X expansion by Cwmhiraeth, size was 205 characters of readable prose
 * 5X expansion size is 2,110 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well sourced, well-written
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found


 * Thorius pennatulus
 * Article bot-generated as a stub on July 23, 2007
 * Before 5X expansion by Cwmhiraeth, size was 305 characters of readable prose
 * 5X expansion size is 1,773 characters of readable prose
 * NPOV, well sourced, well-written
 * Every paragraph sourced
 * Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found


 * Symbol confirmed.svg GOOD 2 GO, Endangered Species articles
 * Maile66 (talk) 17:35, 3 October 2012 (UTC)