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Izaak Huru Doko

 * ... that after helping organize the armed struggle against Dutch forces, National Hero of Indonesia Izaak Huru Doko worked mainly as an educator?
 * Reviewed: Dinkey Creek Bridge

Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nominated at 03:54, 24 June 2013 (UTC).


 * Symbol possible vote.svg The article doesn't actually say he personally fought in the Revolution; it says he organized others to fight in it. Gatoclass (talk) 16:04, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Right, and source confirms. Changed hook. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:07, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Right, and source confirms. Changed hook. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:07, 24 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Okay, but "organizing fighting" is rather imprecise - he wasn't the sole organizer, and "fighting" is a vague term that could mean anything. I'm thinking that something along the lines of "helping organize the armed struggle against the Dutch" might be better. Gatoclass (talk) 16:25, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Sounds good, adapted. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:02, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol voting keep.svg Article is long enough and new enough, and offline citation accepted AGF. Hook looks good after the revision. &mdash;Offenbach (talk) 00:48, 25 June 2013 (UTC)