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James Dredge, Jr., James Dredge, Sr.

 * ... that engineer James Dredge, Sr. was the father of James Dredge, Jr. who, because of paralysis, was unable to continue managing the journal, The Engineer?
 * Reviewed: Cliff Bole; Raymond D. Tarbuck

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Charles Matthews (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 00:42, 7 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Symbol possible vote.svg Both created Jan 6 and nommed the 7th, so both meet newness. Sr. has 2014 characters (329 words) and Jr. has 3179 characters (517 words), so both meet size requirements. Both are neutral, though both have an excessive use of the word "notable" (which seems a bit peacockish). Citations seem to be in order and appear to be reliable. No evidence of copyvio or plagiarism. Hook is fine (153 chars). Unable to verify hook citation regarding paralysis as the referenced page 201 doesn't show for me in Google books (other pages in the book show up, but that page says it isn't available online). All three author-editors have established and good histories, so I'm fine with AGF if others are. ··· 日本穣 ? · 投稿  · Talk to Nihonjoe ·  Join WP Japan ! 08:13, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I've removed overuse of the term "notable" from both articles. The sentence in the source reads: "Dredge in particular proved to be a worthy successor, and was actively involved in managing the journal until May 1903, when paralysis prevented him from continuing." --Rosiestep (talk) 17:32, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Sounds good to me. I see no other issues, and I'll AGF on the content of the source sentence. This one is good to go. ··· 日本穣 ? · 投稿  · Talk to Nihonjoe ·  Join WP Japan ! 17:41, 27 January 2013 (UTC)