Template:Did you know nominations/Jasuben Shilpi

Jasuben Shilpi

 * ... that Jasuben Shilpi, the Indian sculpture artist was known as "The Bronze woman of India"?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Darah dan Doa

Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk). Self nom at 03:05, 21 January 2013 (UTC)




 * Article was created on 21 Jan.
 * Prose has 1795 characters when this was written.
 * No PoV concerns.
 * Plagiarism might be a concern (see & ). But it's just a couple of minutes work to rephrase all that and I'll leave that to Tittodutta.
 * Hook is interesting and is cited in the article. Suraj  T  14:24, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism? Those are mainly proper nouns! Names of states.. maharashtra karnataka kerala tamil nadu bihar uttaranchal and rajasthan.. "Bronze woman of India" a title, "gandhi and martin luther king jr" proper nouns etc! --Tito Dutta (talk) 14:43, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Shouldn't have used that P-word. :p " installed in florida university jacksonville chicago and city of charlotte north carolina" are not a string of proper nouns. It's bordering on close paraphrasing. I was tempted to pass it, but I assumed you would correct it, instead of using the time (and number of keystrokes) it would have taken to correct that, by replying here instead. Suraj  T  14:55, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Those two words "installed in" is not close paraphrasing! Anyway, I have replaced the word "installed" with "situated" but "install" sound better for "statues", I think! Remaining part of the sentence mentions the places, I have reordered few proper nouns too! --Tito Dutta (talk) 15:28, 21 January 2013 (UTC)

Good to go. And sorry for the plagiarism accusation. I meant "please rephrase those sentences". And thanks for correcting it. :) Suraj  T  15:48, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. --Tito Dutta (talk) 15:55, 21 January 2013 (UTC)