Template:Did you know nominations/Jim Brown (footballer, born 1952)


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:48, 2 August 2016 (UTC)

Jim Brown (footballer, born 1952)

 * ... that the footballer Jim Brown collected financial records during his time working as a commercial manager at Chesterfield, that were eventually used to prosecute club chairman Darren Brown for fraud?



5x expanded by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 16:25, 26 July 2016 (UTC).


 * Reviewed: Shawshank tree


 * Symbol confirmed.svg 5x expanded readable prose, interesting and reference hook. Article is of good standard and within policy. QPQ met. EchetusXe (talk) 20:51, 29 July 2016‎ (UTC)
 * The hook is 198 characters. I suggest trimming it a little:
 * ALT1: ... that while working as a commercial manager at Chesterfield, footballer Jim Brown collected financial records that were eventually used to prosecute club chairman Darren Brown for fraud? Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
 * If it needs trimming down slightly, that's fine. Kosack (talk) 20:04, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes, it could do with trimming down but I couldn't think of a way to trim it down, so the slightly shorter ALT is better imo.EchetusXe 21:18, 1 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Restoring tick for ALT1 per Echetus' review. Yoninah (talk) 23:36, 1 August 2016 (UTC)