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Joe Danger: The Movie

 * ... that the video game Joe Danger: The Movie is set in Hollywood but was developed by a UK-based studio, and it was first shown in Germany?
 * Reviewed: Bethel Strict Baptist Chapel, Wivelsfield; Ditchling Unitarian Chapel

Created/expanded by Fox. Nominated by Odie5533 (talk) at 22:54, 15 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Uh, not to be rude, but X201 did not write this article, I did. He did give some input, so perhaps a co-author. &mdash; Joseph Fox 17:11, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I am very sorry. I did not pay close attention to the actual differences in the history. I have changed the nomination here to you as the sole creator, as X201's contributions, while useful, are more cleanup-based such as categorization. I'm glad you were watching the page so that you saw my addition of the DYK to the talk, and I do apologize for not looking closer at your contributions. --Odie5533 (talk) 17:47, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
 * That's perfectly fine mate. :) &mdash; Joseph Fox 09:43, 17 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Length is ok, article is reasonably well sourced and new, but I'm afraid I don't care for the hook at all. There is nothing unusual about a video game being based in a different locale than the studio that produced it. What about something like this:
 * ... that the upcoming release Joe Danger: The Movie is actually a video game that lampoons various Hollywood films?


 * Beeblebrox (talk) 18:23, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Your hook sounds much better. --Odie5533 (talk) 19:42, 16 October 2011 (UTC)

seems like we're good to go with new hook. Beeblebrox (talk) 19:21, 23 October 2011 (UTC)