Template:Did you know nominations/John G. Campbell

John G. Campbell

 * ... that despite having served as a member of the United States Congress, John G. Campbell was unable to prove to a court that he was a United States citizen?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mildred Lewis Rutherford

Created/expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 23:12, 23 November 2012 (UTC)


 * QPQ done
 * Hook is most interesting, and brief enough
 * Expanded today almost 9x


 * I will review the rest tomorrow when I have more time Chris857 (talk) 04:56, 24 November 2012 (UTC)


 * The one ref I have access to checks out, AGF on the three books
 * Article has inline citations, one news article and three books (Black Mountain Press appears okay)
 * I corrected a few small grammar issues
 * One paragraph in the political career section handles neutrality well


 * Issues / Suggestions:
 * "During his time in office, he introduced a variety of petitions and about 18 bills during his term including a bill to repeal the tariffs on movable type and paper." I think one of the two bold clauses should be removed as they seem redundant.
 * "The campaign was dominated by the candidate's personalities..." Was this the personality of one candidate or all of them? If all, then it should be "candidates' personalities"


 * Chris857 (talk) 23:15, 24 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Suggestions were acted upon, AGF on offline sources and avoidance of copyvio. Chris857 (talk) 20:06, 25 November 2012 (UTC)