Template:Did you know nominations/Joy Ufema


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:56, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

Joy Ufema

 * ... that the 1981 television film A Matter of Life and Death is based on the story of nurse Joy Ufema?


 * ALT1: ... that actress Linda Lavin based the 1981 television film A Matter of Life and Death on the story of nurse Joy Ufema?
 * Reviewed: Stanley Bish
 * Comment: Created as part of Women in Red

Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 13:51, 3 September 2016 (UTC).

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 * &#x2713; This article is new and was created on 07:34, 03 September 2016 (UTC)
 * &#x2713; This article meets the DYK criteria at 3433 characters
 * &#x2713; All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
 * Note that this is a biographical article about a living person. All claims must be cited to a reliable source.
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 * &#x2713; The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 94 characters
 * &#x2713; The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 111 characters
 * &#x2713; MWright96 has more than 5 DYK credits. A QPQ review of Template:Did you know nominations/Stanley Bish was performed for this nomination.
 * Symbol confirmed.svg New enough; long enough; neutral; sourced; appears free of copyvio; hook format okay; hook source checks out; QPQ done; no image. Rosekelleher (talk) 22:28, 5 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg These hooks are not hooky at all. It would be far more interesting to say something about what she did, like:
 * ALT2: ... that Joy Ufema fellow nurses felt she had been given too much autonomy when she started granting last wishes to dying patients? Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 12 September 2016 (UTC)
 * I agree with your suggestion. MWright96 (talk) 06:24, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Thank you. New reviewer needed for ALT2. I'm just wondering if the word should be "license" or "leeway" rather than "freedom" (the author is trying to paraphrase "latitude"). Yoninah (talk) 09:20, 13 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Comment Maybe "autonomy" rather than "freedom"?  Grand&#39;mere Eugene (talk) 02:51, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's very good. I tweaked ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 12:06, 14 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Symbol confirmed.svg ALT2 is much more "hooky", at 129 characters is well within length requirement, and is an acceptable paraphrase of the sentence found in the cited source, "Nurses complained that she was allowed too much latitude" in granting the wishes of dying patients. I agree with the assessment of Rosekelleher that the article meets other DYK requirements, too. GTG. Grand&#39;mere Eugene (talk) 18:54, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Comment More recent references show Ufema has apparently begun using her maiden name again, as in "Joy (Ufema) Counsel". That's how she is identified in the external link to the video, and in this piece. Should the article be updated and moved to reflect the name she is now using? Grand&#39;mere Eugene (talk) 23:13, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
 * the page name should be the WP:COMMONNAME which most articles call her. Since she rose to fame and wrote books as Joy Ufema, I think we should stick with this name and just mention in the article that she divorced in whatever year and went back to using her maiden name. Yoninah (talk) 21:36, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, Yoninah, I like your solution: "also known as". Cheers! — Grand&#39;mere Eugene (talk) 23:43, 17 September 2016 (UTC)