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Kebyar-Kebyar

 * ... that Gombloh's song "Kebyar-Kebyar" is the only pop song regularly used in Indonesia's Independence Day ceremonies?
 * Reviewed: George Larner
 * Comment: For Indonesia's Independence Day (17 August)

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 04:55, 11 July 2012 (UTC)




 * Symbol confirmed.svg QPQ done.  New enough.  Long enough.  No images to check.  No plagiarism concerns.  Fully supported by inline citations. Neutral enough.  Hook found in text as "The Indonesian pop singer Fariz RM writes that "Kebyar-Kebyar" is the only pop song which receives this treatment in the country."  Hook is interesting enough and supported by inline sources.
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline and indonesian sources support relevant text and not plagiarised to write the article. --LauraHale (talk) 06:25, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

Good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 06:25, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * And the date? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:35, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with running it on that date. --LauraHale (talk) 06:36, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:47, 11 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Crisco, I'd change that hook: "only pop song often used" is awkward--consider changing "often" to "regularly". Drmies (talk) 02:22, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:10, 25 July 2012 (UTC)