Template:Did you know nominations/Laßt uns sorgen, laßt uns wachen, BWV 213

Laßt uns sorgen, laßt uns wachen, BWV 213

 * ... that in Die Wahl des Herkules, Hercules must choose between the good cop and the bad cop?
 * Reviewed: Molgula oculata
 * Comment: ALT1 ... that The Choice of Hercules allows him to soar like an eagle and tear apart serpents?

5x expanded by Nikkimaria (talk). Self nominated at 14:53, 7 June 2013 (UTC).


 * I reviewed the expansion as having been expanded 5 times the size of the original text within the past few days, checked that the prose is 1500 characters, verified that the content in the hooks in the the source document, checked whether the source meets WP:RS, and considered whether the content is NPOV. It passes on all these things. The hook is confusing to me, though, and I propose that it be changed to the following:
 * ALT2: ... that the Bach cantata The Choice of Hercules musically describes Hercules soaring like an eagle and tearing apart serpents?
 * I say pass this.  Blue Rasberry    (talk)   16:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)
 * That's fine as an alt, thanks. Nikkimaria (talk) 16:17, 7 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Needs an independent reviewer to approve the proposed ALT2 hook (which I've just labelled). The original and ALT1 hooks have not been approved by the earlier reviewer, who cannot review his or her own ALT. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:07, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

All three proposed hooks are supported by the Mincham source. I personally prefer ALT1 as shorter and a bit puzzling. Aymatth2 (talk) 19:44, 23 June 2013 (UTC)