Template:Did you know nominations/Last Child (band)

Passing, issues corrected. ALT1. --Tomtomn00 (talk • contributions) 14:48, 7 May 2012 (UTC)

Last Child (band)

 * ... that the founders of Last Child are last children?
 * Reviewed: Eleonore Baur

Created/expanded by Redyka94 (talk). Self nom at 05:08, 6 May 2012 (UTC)




 * Symbol confirmed.svg New enough and long enough. Article is neutral enough.  QPQ done.  Article completely supported by inline sources.  Article has no images needing copyright check. Hook properly formatted.
 * Symbol possible vote.svg Close paraphrasing concerns with that source.  Second opinion sought.
 * Symbol question.svg Not sure most people would know what last child was as it is not contextualised to offer explanation. --LauraHale (talk) 06:05, 6 May 2012 (UTC)

Hook needs to be better done. Second opinion needed on text match. --LauraHale (talk) 06:05, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Reworded.
 * ALT 1 "... that the founders of Indonesian band Last Child are the last children of their families?"
 * ALT 2 "... that the Indonesian band Last Child has a rock-styled song with melancholic lyrics?"

Redyka94 ( talk ) 06:59, 6 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Alt1 does not explain what last children are. Alt2 is fine. Close paragraphing issues need to be resolved by editor or some one needs to assure me I've over-reacted and they aren't there. --LauraHale (talk) 07:57, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Oops, I'm sorry. ALT1 is edited. Redyka94  ( talk ) 08:08, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * I've checked against the Indonesian source, no close paraphrasing there. Redyka, you could use a copyedit however. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:15, 6 May 2012 (UTC)

If Crisco is not concerned about this then okay with me. (I think it should be put in quotes.) Alt1 is fine. --LauraHale (talk) 09:30, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol question.svg I must have misunderstood your request to check the sources; I looked at the Indonesian source. Those English bits need work. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:49, 6 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Feel free to check the paraphrasing again. Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:59, 6 May 2012 (UTC)

Happier now. Alt1 is more interesting so would suggest that. --LauraHale (talk) 02:47, 7 May 2012 (UTC)