Template:Did you know nominations/Lejos


 * The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as |this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:02, 17 February 2013 (UTC).

Lejos

 * ... that Toby Love's "Lejos" was praised for its "high-quality musical arrangements"?
 * Reviewed: Premio Lo Nuestro 1993

Created/expanded by DivaKnockouts (talk). Self nom at 01:45, 17 January 2013 (UTC)



Diva, I was checking your contribs, and haven't noticed that you have begun yet the cleanup to avoid a WP:CCI as mentioned at Template:Did you know nominations/Vamos A Celebrar. I'm unaware if DYK has processes related to whether you should submit new DYK noms when you have multiple outstanding copyright issues on past DYKs. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 19:06, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Actually, Hahc21 addressed some of the issues of "Vamos a Celebrar" and I did as well. My last edit being Jan 16. Also, Hahc pointed out on "Papi Te Quiero"'s DYK (which was promoted and featured on the main page earlier today) that he thought issues with "Vamos a Celebrar" was "an isolated one". Also, if you view the "Menor Que Yo" recent history,  I also attempted to address the issues as best as I could. And in this time period, I've also created two new articles "Lejos" (which is nominated for DYK) and "Tengo Un Amor". As you can see by visting their pages, they have no copyright violations. Thank you. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 20:27, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * The concerns go back through all of the articles you've created, not just the most recent. It is not isolatedm, although your most recent articles have improved.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 21:09, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * There. I have throughly checked every article I have created as indicated by . - DivaKnockouts (talk) 22:22, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't know if there is a DYK requirement that would ask you to participate in cleaning up past DYKs before nomming new ones, but there are still issues. I've asked MoonRiddenGirl's opinion as to what's next.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 23:49, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
 * I hadn't noticed the unreliable source on "Dime" and it has been removed. Now, you comment on the other user's talk page about that being the first check with issues. Now, I'm sure I've looked through them all and haves addressed them. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 00:14, 18 January 2013 (UTC)

Still needs a review. The above is not a review for DYK. Regards. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 02:33, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol possible vote.svg Article is not long enough. Current count is 1134 characters, and it needs at least 1500. Moswento talky 12:09, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Alright, I thought so. How about now? Thanks for the review. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 17:03, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I did a quick copyedit, and the article is just below 1500 characters. This is easily rectified by the addition of two things that the article is currently missing: 1) A brief background sentence explaining where this fits into Toby Love's discography - is this from an album? Which album? etc. 2) A brief description of the music video (which wouldn't need a source as it can be referenced to the music video). Two other things: 1) Half of the composition section isn't about the composition at all, and should either be moved or the section should be renamed. 2) Can you find an alternative hook, as Dominican View is not particularly notable, so citing their opinion doesn't make for an interesting hook. A lot of comments, but hopefully not too much work to fix. Moswento talky 12:37, 14 February 2013 (UTC)


 * ALT1 ... that on his song "Lejos", Toby Love takes influences from R. Kelly, Michael Jackson and Lauryn Hill?
 * How is this ALT? — DivaKnockouts (talk) 16:50, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
 * In short, it doesn't reflect the sources. The sources say that Toby Love takes influences from those people, but doesn't say these influences can all be found in the song Lejos. Nor do they say that the song itself is a "fusion of R&B with both traditional and modern bachata". The article needs to be changed as a result. Two other issues: 1) The second line of reception is presented as fact rather than opinion. Even as opinion, it's a bit problematic because the two cited sources seem to be based on the same press release, which presumably has come from Top Stop Music (it's marked as 'Press Release' on the US Hispanics site). 2) In the 'Music video' section, the phrase "she turns on him and has two guards shoot the place up" is not encyclopedic language, and should be rephrased. Sorry if it sounds like I'm being difficult, but this article is still not ready for the main page. Moswento talky 10:02, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
 * I withdraw as I don't think I can come up with a hook. Thanks for your review. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 16:13, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
 * Symbol delete vote.svg Nomination withdrawn. Moswento talky 19:18, 15 February 2013 (UTC)