Template:Did you know nominations/Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)


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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:16, 21 December 2016 (UTC)

Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)

 * ... that Kalanimoku caused the death of his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
 * ALT1:... that Likelike (pictured) and her son died of shock after her husband fired cannons outside their house?
 * ALT2:... that Kalanimoku fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he caused the death of his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau?
 * Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Philip III of Navarre

Moved to mainspace by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).


 * Comment The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". Edwardx (talk) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I went ahead and changed it. I just didn't want to say directly "killed" so "caused the death" works as well. Does it need a second review or is change minuscule enough not to matter? --KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:11, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks KAVEBEAR. I concur with your reasoning, and have done the same for ALT2. No review needed - this is the sort of thing that should get tweaked later on anyway. Edwardx (talk) 10:16, 23 November 2016 (UTC)