Template:Did you know nominations/Louis John Gill


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The result was: promoted by Bob Amnertiopsis ∴ChatMe! 22:20, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Louis John Gill

 * ... that Louis John Gill was the original architect of the San Diego Zoo (entrance pictured)?
 * Reviewed: SEMTA Commuter Rail

Created/expanded by Keizers (talk). Nominated by MelanieN (talk) at 17:23, 26 June 2014 (UTC).


 * Symbol question.svg New (23rd), long enough, neutral, significant close paraphrasing needs to be addressed, QPQ done. Hook doesn't have an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Several paragraphs/bullets need citations. Please send a ping if I forget to respond. czar ♔   02:44, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the suggestions, User:Czar. I think I have dealt with the problems; please take another look. --MelanieN (talk) 15:46, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

I'm still seeing some close paraphrasing:

I'd go back to the sources and make sure that every sentence is presented as its own idea, not just in rephrased, parallel structures. "During this time", for example, should not just be replaced with another turn of phrase, but recast in such a way to be materially different from the source, etc. czar ♔   18:52, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, is that better? --MelanieN (talk) 20:03, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Yep! Hook checks out, good work, gtg czar ♔   21:00, 28 June 2014 (UTC)